NerdBird

Thanks for highlighting the problem with the vaccine paragraph, will work in the fact that it takes on the cold attributes and mutates into something more viral down the line. ...

you can find the rewrite of this chapter here: Hope it has improved in your eyes :)

Thanks for your review again timmy!:D i really appreciate it ^-^ and yes I have rewrote this, this is the second draft of the first chapter, i want to make ...

I will be doing a rewrite of the first chapter, splitting it into two separate sections, the prologue and the aftermath, due to feedback^-^

Ok i sort of get it now, might be an idea to say the poppies absorbed his blood ;) more creepy! aha

Thanks! ^-^ Much appreciated Timmy! Most of the sentences needed a look over on my part but I was too eager and uploaded it anyway :') I've since gone over ...

I'm hoping to edit out all the little nitpicks in the second draft but all is duly noted ;) I do agree with most of your comments though! :) Thanks! ...

surprisingly I haven't seen attack on titan! :') I'd literally only just posted it so that's possibly why :) wouldn't we all love more views/feedback though? ;) sadly, the shifties ...

Hey :D thanks for your review! :D In the beginning and in the beginning cont. It goes more in depth about the characters (including a description of chrissy ;) ) ...

hehe thanks :D my avatar has my little nerd bird sat atop of my head ;) to be honest, ive not been a huge fan of sci-fi, but the first ...

I just meant, as in instead of 'Sir, look i dont know where i am', maybe just not address him as sir entirely :) and just say 'look i dont ...

Continuation of the first section, hope you enjoy! :)

Chapter one shall be changing a LOT, ive decided, but you get the jist of it ;) the story changes dramatically from what it is now, so I thought Id ...

Thanks for taking the time to review! :) I'll admit it does look a tad daunting in one fat chunk :P I have been told about alleys thoughts and I ...

Firstly, thanks for taking the time to review! I know it looks like a daunting chunk! I'm figuring out where to put chapter breaks still :) I have noticed a ...