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Hello Deanie! I'd love it if you could review the first chapter of my novel False Gods. It's a YA/ Sci-Fi about a hacker who bites off a little more ...

Hello KeepWriting! I'd love it if you could review the first chapter of my novel False Gods. It's a YA/ Sci-Fi about a hacker who bites off a little more ...

Hello Noelle! I'd love it if you could review the first chapter of my novel False Gods! :) It's a Ya/Sci-Fi about a hacker who bites off more than she ...

Heya! Im just starting getting all my chapters out, but here is my newest revised chapter 1 for my Shifties novel. There will be more to follow! o/

Hi there! Im not sure that you'd like this? Its my revised chapter 1 of my novel(based on all current reviews/suggestions) and im now looking for something a little more ...

HAI! I would love it if you could give me your take/opinion on my revised chapter 1 of my novel(based on all currents reviews/suggestions) There will be more to come ...

Hi! I'll be brave and let you test the waters with the first chapter of my novel! I have revised it based on all current comments and suggestions so another ...

I would love it if you could review my revised chapter 1 of my novel! Thank you!

Hi there! Id love it if you could review my REVISED chapter based on all current comments! Thank you!

I'd love if you could review my revised first chapter! Heres the link :)

I would love it if you could review my first chapter please! :) Thanks for your time! :)

Hi there! :) I would love it if you could review my new first chapter when you get the chance :) Thank you very much!

Hi there there's! I would love it if yout could review my first chapter Found please! :)

You can review my revised version of The reviews are pre-edit :)

That is fine @Silverlock :D