Nephthys

PART 3 INT. TANGIN MANOR CHAPEL - DAY The FAMILY and FRIENDS of the Hollands are gathered in a small chapel for the wedding. A large WOMAN IN PINK sobs ...

Hello, I'm Nephthys. I will be your reviewer for today. :) and has an abusive boyfriend. I would suggest cutting this bit. The reader will figure it out on their ...

Hi, I'm Nephthys, and I will be reviewing your lovely monologue today. STELLA: The funny thing about school is, you meet some of the most interesting people . N n ...

Bump?

Yay! More TV scripts! Wow. That is a LOT to read in one post. I would suggest breaking it up into parts so that it is easier to read. This ...

PART 2 INT. PORTRAIT GALLERY - MYSTERY POV - DAY The CREATURE watches EUDORA and VANCE from a corner. When someone approaches, it hides. FX: Glowing golden humans. NOTE: The ...

Good idea! I'll post the next part soon :) I'll start off by saying, most of the scripts I'm familiar with work in a different style Stage scripts and television ...

Thanks very much for the review! I'll make the formatting a little clearer. Eudora's outfits having 3/4 sleeves was supposed to suggest the type of character she is? Like the ...

I would be honoured if you would review the first bit of my [attempt at a] Doctor Who episode, entitled Attack of the Time Flies Thanks! :)

I'm a big fan of Doctor Who, so I decided to try writing a series (season) of my own :) I call it series 8 1/2. This is the first ...

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Second step: stop, pull over, sit down, move anywhere that allows you a spare minute to inspect yourself. I'd cut out the whole end of the sentence; it seems awkward ...

I'd love a review on my story, The Inspection (Part 2of 2) . In order to understand it, you'll need to read Part 1 , but both parts together are ...

I learnt learned long ago O(h) yes I had seen all the wonders anyone can in life The "oh yes" doesn't really work here. without much any aspirations. Not a ...

I'm finished Seems Like Eternity. Currently working on: German Jew - Eliza:)