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Re: Replying to Reviews: Ettiquette
I have a question for reviewers regarding a point of etiquette that I've been wondering about. Under what circumstances is it okay for someone to reply to a review that ...
Dec 1, 2010 -
Re: I'm New...
Hello, and welcome :) I'd be glad to help you with your paper! 1. Do you think anyone can become a published writer? I'm going to have to quote my ...
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: Worlds of Serendipity (prologue)
Since you gave me such awesome reviews, I though I should attempt to return the favour, although I doubt my review will be nearly as awesome as yours ;) She ...
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: Any good books I can try?
I'll give one more suggestion about a great author, not an individual book. That author is Neil Gaiman. The guy's a genius most of the time. He wrote Coraline and ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: Freya's Replacement (Episode 1)
PART 7 INT. THE TREE TRUNK ROOM. NIGHT. GWENDOLYN sits on the huge bed, leaning against the headboard. IDUN is sprawled out along its length. IDUN ...and the thing with ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: The Robot Project (1.2)
Hi, I'm Nephthys, and I will be your reviewer today :) A glitch in the company’s long running perfection . Awkward. Perfect record maybe? They ignored me; they treated me ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Information required: Aristotle and his works
Here is a link to Poetics. Being a Drama Major, I'm going to say that it's the best thing he wrote :)
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Arms Of Death [Prologue]
Hi, I'm Nephthys, and I will be reviewing your lovely prologue :) They say that in the end your life flashes before your eyes. Unfortunately, I've heard this opening line ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Misunderstood Act 1 Scene 1
Hello, I'm Nephthys, and I will be your reviewer today :) Personally, I was thinking of getting rid of the narrator. He seems unnessesarry. Do you agree with me? I ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: a screenplay. about wife,baby, husband and deep issues
Hello, I am Nephthys and I will be reviewing your screenplay today. :) Kirk is a twenty one year old military soldier in a modern war happening overseas. His wife, ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Cassa-de review-ae
Hi! It's me again :) I was wondering if you could read the rest of the screenplay that I've posted? Since it's long, I was just wondering if you could ...
Nov 27, 2010 -
Re: Third or First Person.
I would have to disagree. Generally, I think it is best to avoid first person. Unless used carefully, and to convey a specific tone, first person can be a disaster. ...
Nov 26, 2010 -
Re: Reviews by Nephthys - Scripts and More (Open)
Bump...? :)
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?
I'd love an overall review on my screenplay, Freya's Replacement . Thanks :)
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: Irish Culture Research
Is this a modern novel or does it take place in the past? If it's modern: - The roads in Ireland are SCARY. They are tiny and twisty. Traffic accidents ...
Nov 25, 2010
