Young Writers Society

The Adventures of Felix Van Doren Characters (In Order of Appearance): FELIX VAN DOREN: An employee of the mysterious institution known as the UnIncorporation. He likes to think of himself ...

Yay! A script! :) Before I start of the review: I'm sure that you've been told this before, but generally it is better not to direct your own work, since ...

I'm back! I'm very glad that my last review was helpful :) “Oh,” Ivy said innocently , skipping to open the door. The combination of "said" and an adverb sometimes ...

Hello, I'm Nephthys, and I will be reviewing your lovely story today! :) The silhouetted shape was the only thing moving in the calm of the night. It crouched low ...

The pale yellow rays of the moon illuminate my skin as I sit upon the wall near my home. Lovely first sentence, except what kind of wall? Without any description ...

Hi, I'm Nephthys, and I will be reviewing your lovely story today! :) The sun began to rise on an island in the middle of the Janenia Sea. The island ...

This sounds AWESOME. I'm going through about the fourth major re-write on my screenplay Freya's Replacement (It is a 1 hour serial drama pilot), and I would LOVE an analysis ...

Hello, I'm Nephthys and I am here to review your lovely story. :) Delanie groaned as she felt herself being shaken from her sleep. First of all, I can't help ...

Here is a synopsis of episode 1: Gwendolyn Strom is a librarian living in Stockholm, Sweden with her aunt and uncle in 1950. Gwendolyn gets engaged to marry Noah Andersen, ...

Hi, You didn't mention anything about scripts in your blurb, so I was wondering if you would consider reviewing one. If you are interested, here is a link to my ...

Hello, I am back for part of my review! :) He yelps and lets go. ZIL takes ADINA's head in his arms and holds her steady so she cannot bite ...

Hi, I'm Nephthys, and I am very excited to review your script today :) First of all, I would suggest leaving details such as "dully lit" (is that even a ...

Hi, I would love if you could review my script Freya's Replacement . I have just massively edited it, and have not received any reviews on the edited version yet. ...

INT. TOWN HALL - STAGE WINGS - NIGHT Thursday 16th December, 2010. Presentation night. ON SCREEN TITLE: Thursday, December 16th 2010 WOW. A screenplay about theatre that takes place on ...

PART 8 INT. SESSRUMNIR. DAY. GWENDOLYN sits on the floor of the main domed room. LOKI is there too. LOKI I'm sure you realize that you're in a very delicate ...