Nefer

This was very easy to read and rhymed well. But I prefered your other poem.

I know this is an old poem but I liked it and wanted to comment. Your rhyming made the poem flow better. The second and third stanza should be together ...

I think he'd look great despite the killing. Dante doesn't look ugly! :P

"Love is a promise, love is a souvenir, once given, never forgotten, never let it disappear." John Lennon.

Random happiness.

I was thinking of the Muppets version too. Too, doesn't that mean a large amount? It can also mean also. I think someone already commented on the dialogue, it was ...

I Predict A Riot - Kaiser Chiefs

^ I love her wavy hair. :D

This should be under Science Fiction if it has anything to do with 'aliens'. Not 'life like', it's meant to be one word: lifelike. walked towards house number 39 There's ...

I'd like to hear this too! :D Very amusing.

I soon as I read this I was reminded of A Christmas Carol , I loved the book and if this is anything like it then I'm sure I'll like ...

I love these! I don't know what else to say but please share more! :D :wink:

These are pretty good, I can never use paint to draw, it comes out wrong.

I'm not too sure if this poem is about suicide? Is it? It wasn't too bad a poem. :D

I liked this poem alot, it reminds me of fairy tales. :D I also agree about lines 9-10 not rhyming well.