Nefer

I liked it. If you correct your mistakes it'll be better, everyone has already made most corrections so there isn't much for me to say.

Suddenly, thousands dead. This line would be better with 'Then' added before 'Suddenly'. "Then, Suddenly, thousands dead." Bodies bombed, blood shead, The word is bloodshed Brothers, sisters, grieving

Bet.

^Is younger than me.

Thanks for welcomeing me everyone! :D Snoink I'm great thanks. :P

Science.

Thanks for the compliments. :) :D

^ lives in Ancient Egypt. :P

Well.. I'm still new so for now it has to be Nox. Maybe I'll add more when I get to know everyone. :D

Audrey Hepburn, Elizabeth Hurley and Rachel Weisz.

This is me: I hate wearing glasses :( : I don't know if you can see this properly:

Bobo: You are not ugly! Chevy: Do you play the guitar? You're so pretty. Hunter: Which one are you? Mack: I love that picture it reminds me alot of my ...

So many to name: Papa Roach, Gewn Stefani, Madonna, Chrsitina Aguilera, Britney Spears, Mariah Carey, Black Eyed Peas, Simple Plan, Busted, McFly, Girls Aloud, Westlife, Blazin Squad, Green Day and ...

Username: Nefer Genre: Prose, Artwork, some poetry. Contact: PM Comments: I usually finish reviews within two-three days. I'm honest and add suggestions where it is needed. I also comment on ...

I was reffered by my friend.