Nefer

The only Anime I've ever watched is Card Captors and I enjoyed it. :P

I'm sure your life can't 'sux' so much as mine. Also welcome, I don't think we've met.

All your posts have capitals, it does tend to get annoying. But if no one else complains you can go on writing in capitals.

English to Russian : The world is your oyster. Russian to English : Peace will be your oyster.

Before I even begin to think about reviewing this, please can you not have your titles in capitals!

I've read the first two paragraphs and it's not bad. I like how you described the 'little ripples'. I will add a proper review when I have more time.

You're welcome. :D And you might want to think about posting a new topic for each chapter otherwise some people might miss them.

I don't know what to say... I like it, it reminds me of how I use to write, the words would just come to me and I would write them ...

Joe once smelled sushi coming from the toilet. Ann didn't give a potato to Joe because he was imaging naughty pranks involving birds poop and underwear. Joe hated pickles so ...

I'm the same as SolisCookies, I don't like Bjork but you did a great job with the shading. :D

Thanks Areida. :D

she didn't know weather Wrong it's 'whether'. This is getting better and I can just imagine what it's like on the ship and the bully women. Good job, there aren't ...

Chapter One 'Society running to dirt, but it's their own fault' This should come after 'about' and not in a new sentence, otherwise if you read the other sentence it ...

Welcome Nikki, I am also a reviewer but I do write sometimes. :D

A tear slips down my face. Shouldn't it be: A tear slides down my face. I slip it off my finger, clutching on it for a moment. It should be: ...