Nebesah

Hola! I'm Em and I will be attacking your paper with my grammatical evils. Forgive me if I seem harsh. I was either 2 minutes away from being a dead ...

Alright, so i vaguely recall reviewing the first six chapters of this and i must say i am a bit disappointed. The first part of this one is good but ...

Wow. I am very amazed that anyone liked this/took time to read it. Honestly, I don't like poetry and I like writing it even less but this just popped into ...

Good It is simple and complex. It is people, mostly children, but pets, husbands, wives too. It is approval, nonchalance, dismay, encouragement, dismissal, and zeal. It is a greeting and ...

I found this hugely amusing. You did a great job with parallelism and what not. Your rhyming only seemed force on one line: the part about the broken chair was ...

Due to my oober busy schedule during the school year, I have only JUST NOW gotten your message that you sent almost a year ago about your update to Partly ...

Chapter 2 I plop down on my bed and let out a groan. A couple empty tapioca pudding cups tumble from my bed to the floor. Sadly, three and a ...

Chapter One “Psst…” “Ugh.” I grunt in protest. “Psst…Cantaloupe!” A finger pokes me in the side. “Ugh-nuhhh!” I roll over as best as I can in the back seat, trying ...

I am also back. Again. 'Tis entirely possible few (or none) of you will remember me because: a) I've been gone since September-ish and b) I wasn't that huge to ...

Wonderful. Absolutely Wonderful. I noticed a few gramatical errors here and there but it wasn't anything major. In any case, I FIRMLY BELIEVE that you should keep going with this. ...

It's been a while since I've posted anything (or even written anything for that matter). Anyways, here it is and I want brutal honesty!!! Benji Wilcox Private High School Tuesday, ...

I would have to say Eragon. I saw the movie first and was all, "this is cool I guess." A year later I read the book then watched the movie ...

Alright, so I found this lovely prologue after I had reviewed Chapter 1. I am now seeing Chp. 1 in a new, significantly more flattering light. so, to review the ...

Hmm, alright. Ok. Umm... This was interesting and is going to be tricky to review because I've never really read anything like it and I'm not sure if I like ...

Hello Hero, They asked him what he'd to say This should be "They asked him what he had to say," or something along those lines. And now I shall share ...