Nebesah

I am now officially Nebesah! In case you guys didn't notice :) Anyways I used to be EAHailstone. Which was a horrible name. 13 year old me was terrible at ...

Hello, my name is Em. My friends call me The Red Pen Nazi because I am ruthless/brutally honest with my opinions/reviews. Alright, you have a ton of grammatical errors. Okay ...

Hello, I'm Em. My friends call me The Red Pen Nazi because I'm brutally honest with my opinions. Please don't hate me. Alright, honestly, I didn't read the whole thing ...

Okay, so not to be one of those obnoxious people who make excuses for their work and try to explain why their work is awful or, worse yet, why the ...

Cadaver I’m just another Cadaver. Formaldehyde sits in my veins Like fragrant pink blood. I live in a refrigerator. I am cold, dead. Mute. My teeth are yellow From the ...

Hello! My name is em and I will be massacring your story today. Before I begin, I would like to apologize for any hurt feelings/resentment/murderous desires you may feel after ...

Hello! My name is em and I will be massacring your story today. Before I begin, I would like to apologize for any hurt feelings/resentment/murderous desires you may feel after ...

So, my name is Em and I can sympathize with you. Once upon a time (ugh, I feel so old!) I was an angry, PMSing 13 year-old girl who hated ...

Hello. I am em and I will be reviewing your work to the best of my ability. But as I am not well-versed in poetry I may be harsh to ...

Chapter 3 We get back to our rooms fifteen minutes before the bell for breakfast rings, giving us just enough time to shower and get dressed. We head down the ...

I am! 'Tis called Nefarious Purposes. It's a slightly absurd light-hearted comedy about a high school girl with hopelessly embarassing parents, an evil ex-boyfriend, and a slew of hormonal peers. ...

Hello! I’m Em and I am here to review your work. I apologize ahead of time for the intense nature with which I will attack your paper with my grammatical ...

I orginally wrote this for a contest but I wound up really liking it. I had to keep it under 2000 words though which is why it doesn't go as ...

Hello. My name is Em and I will be reviewing your story. Brace yourself for my harsh criticisms... Introduction June 10th,1692 Bridget's head bumped against the bottom of the cart. ...

Alright, I will be reviewing your story. Kind of harshly. So I am apologizing up front. pattering against the collapsing, deteriorating roof. Okay, two plot-type questions: Does the baby not ...