Natsworthy

Wow. I don't think I found any grammatical errors except for ‘It’s not going to me like that this time. ’ I promised her. I couldn't find any faults in ...

That was a great peice of writing, everything was structured perfectly and flowed beautifully, in my opinion. The only mistakes I could find were: I placed my hands into my ...

It may have been one big rant, but at least it was interesting. I couldn't find any problems regarding grammar, but I think a few peices could be rephrased to ...

I really loved this peice, it is full of emotion and meaning (in a strange way). I know what you mean about Patrick Ness, after reading his books I found ...

Wow, I absolutely love it. From the fist sentence I was totally immersed, I always struggle to find a good opener but you have really got it perfect. This peice ...

hi, okay, your giving a lot of information in quite big chunks at the start. Spread it out a bit. Her blondish black hair was untied and she was wearing ...

Hi I'm Nats and I'm going to try and review this as best as I can. I found the start slightly odd, at first I wasn't sure what to think, ...

Thanks for the comments, I'll take these all into concideration. I'm very glad it did just what I wanted, the whole point of this was for it to be mysterious, ...

Just something I put together to start of something that I hope, for once, I might finish. The barman waited a few moments for the customer to get a proper ...

Hi, I've not really done many reviews but, obviously, I need to start somewhere so I'll give it my best shot. I really do love the idea of this. For ...

OK, this is my first try at a short story, and I find them impossible to do, because they all come out rubbish. This is a prompted story for homework, ...

This starts off incredibly well. I can really see everything happening. One of the bits I found slightly confusing was when you said: The baby seemed to have stopped whimpering, ...