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Re: deleted
This is a very well worded portrayal of how inspiration flows from a writer! It's almost as though you're defining that inexplicable rush of thoughts that burst from silence and ...
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: Congratulations & Celebrations.
I can see what you mean now. Perhaps it was a bit to far-fetched to take a small experience like that and try to convert it into a full blown ...
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: The Foolish Tool
Much appreciated! I feel overjoyed to see that you picked up on what I tried to convey with this. It's something that comes out of personal experience as well as ...
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: The Foolish Tool
Just a step to lend support, no greater purpose to me. What else is there to be? Just a fool, average tool.. What can you see? People look right past, ...
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: Congratulations & Celebrations.
And by the way, it's not just a story. It's not a character, either. This WAS my 12'th birthday.
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: Congratulations & Celebrations.
Thanks, but that was just a bit too harsh, bro. I get that you're trying to help, but it's not like you should feel offended either.
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: I can't make you love me.
That's a really sad story. I agree it belongs in the romance section, though. I think it's really foul when people cheat.. I'm a victim of it myself. I feel ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: Mike
This was a really good short story. I feel very tied in with the character, Carrie. I often find myself seeking the attention of my older sisters, though I can ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: What Time, Doth Tell.
At the age of five, I stared out my first grade window and looked out into the city. Everything was so familiar, but in a new light I saw the ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: Congratulations & Celebrations.
Moving in a crowd of faces that know me no further than my name. I can see and hear the laughs, the stories they have to tell, of the "better ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: My Aborted Child
I must say, I'm absolutely stunned. If I'm not crying now, I'm sure I will my second read through. This, was one powerful impact of a story. A truth, that ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: Thirteen
It didn't surprise me that this poem hooked me with it's title. Reading this was almost like watching simple but well detailed sequences of images. Flashing pictures that tell a ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: Mashed Potatoes
I truly enjoyed this piece. It's almost as though, In at least my perspective of course, that this is almost how some children feel when they're stuck at the table ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: So You Sailed Away
I really loved this. It actually shows the sincerity behind a womans feelings. Plenty of women lost the loves of their lives, sailors who put their pride on as shields ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: The Ballad of Sir Gideon
I honestly loved this very much. It applies so many true factors of love within it as well! So many people look for pride, and bounty to assist with love, ...
Apr 6, 2011
