NathanielC

I always tell myself that a girl could laugh into the eyes of a boy in love, and feel nothing. I always ask, "What do they feel when they're in ...

Wowowweewow! I did mess up the senses Dx Good point! I should be more precautions with this, Thanks! And when I say pluck forehead, I mean like. Flick, with a ...

Portals. Wide and open to nobody but me, it seems. Oceans of memories, waterfalls, a gateway to my dreams. Within the abyss of glory I find myself sinking within it's ...

Reading this greatly fascinated me. There are SO many different things one could assume about this piece! It's almost like a stencil for the common life situations teens and young ...

:!: :!: WARNING! :!: :!: the following piece contains very graphic and disturbing content! It includes Violence, Rape, and murder! Please take caution before reading! Nicholas Crest helped his fiancé

I really appreciate the review! I'm very glad you pointed out the grammar mistakes, I have a tendency to rush recklessly when I get one of those "waves of inspiration" ...

I always usually seem to ask myself this question a lot. After I write something, or jot an idea down, I ask myself. "Why this?" I'm often inspired by mixed ...

This is a story that so many people live out just about every day. But you've told it in an effective and creative way! Expressing that jumble of emotions that ...

I just wanted to take some time out to say, that this website is close to if not already the best out there for writers! There are many art sites ...

It is almost nine o' clock at night. Inside her home, a young woman watches out her window for a moment before wandering into her home to turn on some ...

Hi there! Welcome to the YWS! I myself am fairly new here, but you'll learn to love it fast! Community of fair people, fantastic posting and review system, and very ...

Alright. I do appreciate the impute and corrective help, but perdido, I think you didn't exactly see what I meant in the line, Morning brings a real smile, one worth ...

Many, Many thanks! I was in a very different mood when I wrote this.. So I gave it my best shot! I'm so very glad you enjoyed it! Muchos gracias, ...

Thank you! I can see how you thought this may have been a song inspired thing; because it was! The poem itself is not really similar to the song at ...

The war of everyday has left me torn, my patience worn. So I just turn away. Because the things we really mean, don't come from what we say. I've no ...