NathanielC

I don't even know where to begin, when my mind tried to dissect all of this! You have the makings to become a very good lyric writer! This sounds like ...

This is really interesting. I can almost sense a bit of anger in her. She seems to have a bit more sentiment and thought in her as opposed to other ...

Whoa! Very majestic looking! I'd love to see it in person, it looks well done! How much time did it take you to do it all?

You don't know how much I agree with this. Sorry was a word that used to be the key to the foregrounds of forgiveness. Now? It's a cheap ticket to ...

I appreciate your input, I honestly do. It makes me happy that you'd take the time out to reach to me. However, I feel the expression "Easier said than done" ...

A warm, sunny morning in July. Trees covered the windows of Parkview Hospital as small warm rays of sunlight broke through and shone on the face of a happy mother. ...

There's a lot missing. A lot of questions that someone can ask about the person in this poem. But, then again.. I feel like that's the point. It's not who, ...

Everyone feels fear. In romance, it's no different. But with it, many new fears arise. Deception. Heartbreak. Loss of interest. Painful argumentation.. There's fear to be had and blended with ...

You pushed me. And so I've fallen. Tall and proud, now broken battered all around. My heart; it cannot make a sound. It's life seeping into the ground. And so ...

this is very very easy to relate to. the feeling of loosing something simple, but great. A true friend. I can feel the storm of feelings, emotion that blew over ...

This is exactly. Word for word. A relationship just got kicked from last night. This speaks to me like a symbolic call from above, and I greatly appreciate your effort ...

I find great irony, reading this now that I'm on the polar opposite of the scale you were on to have written this. I feel like I'm reading a wish ...

I am a warrior. I've no name or race. I was born to fight, with a great world to face. Scars that bear stories, none to hear what I say. ...

I sense this is a truth that exists in all. Just as you stated in this very well structured piece, we all suffer from confusion. Paranoia. Discomfort. We as humans, ...

I tried, over and over. But all I got was Error 404 on this one! Good brain buzzer, though. Gave me something tricky to solve today! Nice!