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Re: Best Roman Emperor
Discuss.
Dec 23, 2008 -
Re: USA's Best President
Zachary Taylor. Duh. Nothing like military leaders who get into office, are incredibly inept, and preserve their reputations by dying before they could do more damage! *** So in conclusion, ...
Dec 23, 2008 -
Re: Happy Holidays and Merry Christmas!
Let us know what you're doing for Christmas, Hanukkah, and/or the Holidays :smt114
Dec 23, 2008 -
Re: On Opening the Chat
If anyone PMs a moderator or JM about opening the chat, you will be banned from the chat for one week.
Dec 23, 2008 -
Re: Holiday Icons Up!
Btw- There's a glitch. The popular topic icons and the normal icons are exactly the same. That's done on purpose. If it was a glitch, I probably would've noticed.
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: Holiday Icons Up!
Enjoy the holiday icons :smt114 If you can't see them, simply hit refresh.
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: a prostitute's point of view
Wow, you already edited this. “It depends…” I really like how you changed this. Excellent. The title is also much better than before. Always awesome to see something that just ...
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: 100 Reviews In 15 Days
Did 5 today! So that leaves only 89 to go... I need to step it up. I have nothing going on after tomorrow except for Christmas, so I think I ...
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: For my mind
I reviewed another work by yourself, and I like this one a lot more. You said that you proofread this one, and it shows. I also like the general idea ...
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: the callousness of newborns
You don't disappoint Jack. I found this to be well-written, and your imagery & tone is excellent. The poem comes across as melancholy and wistful. The speaker is captured well, ...
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: a prostitute's point of view
Proofread! Just by proofreading, you'll put your work above 90% of the other stuff that gets posted. You want to read your story at least twice before posting it; that ...
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: Rage the day
Proofread. a book who's page For a poem as short as this, you really shouldn't have spelling errors or simple grammatical mistakes such as this. In fact, I'm not sure ...
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: When a YWS Staffer PMs You, Please Be Polite
Yep, OE is exactly right, and I don't want her point to be missed so I'm bolding the last line of my first post: YWS is a community for young ...
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: When a YWS Staffer PMs You, Please Be Polite
If a Greeter, Instructor, JM, Moderator, or an admin contacts you, the least you can do in return is be polite. These people put in a lot of time and ...
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: Shadows of Ourselves
I thought it was pretty good. Just a few things: The last line in the first stanza doesn't go right. For one, it's too abrupt; you're shifting from being figurative ...
Dec 21, 2008
