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Eden is 11? I know you said you don't want to change the dialogue, but you're going to have to; Eden simply speaks too well for an 11 year old. ...

Capitalize those I's. If it was intentional, capitalize them. If it was unintentional, capitalize them. Always, always capitalize the letter 'I' when left by itself. These are interesting poems; the ...

Since this is a rather long piece, I'd suggest heavy reviewing; that is, you should go out and review a lot of works by other people. Not everyone will return ...

This belongs in poetry, so it's in the right place. Still, it is one of those pieces that doesn't quite comfortably fit in poetry, but definitely doesn't fit as a ...

Hammertime.

My apologies :)

Here are the stats: 2,138 male members 5,039 female members 973 declined to state gender As of this post, there are 8,149 members. Subtracting the 973 number from that gives ...

Galerius, relax. It's Christmas after all :) But more seriously, just because you believe something doesn't make it so; indeed, your all-or-nothing stance on the issue resembles that which you ...

Don't post here often, but here's a picture of me from this past summer:

Erm, I sent my envelope a looooong time ago and haven't gotten anything. Did you run out? :/ ~Yoyo 8) Nope. What happened is kind of complicated... the post office ...

Do you have a cell-phone already, and do you have iTunes? I have both a cell phone and iTunes. I'd probably go with an iTouch then. If your cell-phone works ...

lol Galerius; arguing for simply arguing? Anyways, you are correct on many points, but it's also all debatable. Diocletian may or may not have committed suicide, and my mistake was ...

Agreed Blink; the background was bothering me. Anyways, I finally got fed up trying to find a good background that I just made one myself. If you can't see the ...

Haha, I'm going through a very similar "predicament." My current cell-phone contract with Verizon expires in a couple months, and I'm trying to decide whether to get an iPhone, Blackberry ...

Not really random, but... I don't care :P