Nate

Nate, I'm worried by the fact you ever thought Vanilla Ice was remotely cool ... That's because you're British. We Americans have refined tastes such as McDonalds and Dentistry.

First off, your grammar is good. I also like your style of writing; it flows pretty well. A few things: "She’ll begin with the yelling, the horrible screaming that makes ...

Your rhyme scheme is very odd. You go AABBCC then DEFFGHG, which is a bit like driving in a straight line then all of a sudden zig-zagging for no apparent ...

Putting a comma at the end of every line isn't all that necessary. Some do, some don't, and I don't think it much matters. Commas are used to show a ...

It's always good to be able to read three poems at once from an author because it gives you a good feel for the author's style, and you've got a ...

From your blog entry, it sounds like you don't do poetry very often, if at all. I'm not a poet either, lol. The major problem with the poem is the ...

crikey... how did Jiggity even find this? I even remember making this; it was right after the first YWS outage. I forget exactly what happened, but it took half a ...

For more early nineties love (and to understand Jiggity's earlier comment), see this . And yes. This is what counted as cool when I was in second grade.

Just as a quick note, the holiday icons will remain up until December 31.

I'm doing terribly... 20 reviews since this thread was made. In my defense, the past ten days were busier than I expected. But, I'm still going to stick to my ...

Sock ->> I am admin, overseer of all this domain. The proper question to ask is, "What do I not know?" I actually have multiple statistical sources that I use ...

There appears to be no content on the third and fourth pages, and the fifth page appears completely blank. While this may be a literary device you have employed to ...

This seems more like a personal essay or a blog entry more than anything else, so it's hard to comment on anything other than to give my own reaction. Fortunately, ...

Why did you quote your own work? If you were bumping, just be patient. It can take some time to get a review, and December 25 is the slowest day ...

Color you tenebrous indeed. A great poem is built in layers. You have the surface layer that is understandable to the casual reader, then you have subsequent layers that only ...