Nate

It's an interesting story and I hope you continue it. However, you need to proofread before submitting your work. For example: We surest an all out assault on the Vorog ...

Firstly, please rate your work. You didn't assign this work a rating, and it needed a rating of (at the very least) 16+. I gave it an 18+ rating due ...

Happiness ran from me like a young woman from a stranger in a dark alley. Woah, interesting simile, but I'm not sure I like it. In the paragraph, you talk ...

I haven't read the other chapters, but it sounds like the rebel leader gave up way too quickly. In doing so, he sounds more of a weakling than anything else. ...

Hey there JediRex! I haven't read the other chapters, but the story is interesting and I hope you continue it. There are two things you need to work on. The ...

Way too many ellipses. Those are the '...' you repeat over and over. If you are going to use an ellipsis, then use it sparingly and rarely. Otherwise, it just ...

Rather than posting something right after you've written it, give it a few days to stew. I think this is the best advice! I can never self-edit something that I ...

You might want to keep researching ;) It's always seemed to me that some oppose No Child Left Behind merely because it was one of President Bush's signature acts. What ...

Out of curiosity, where is the Holy Trinity thing mentioned in the Bible? Was having a debate with a friend the other day on it; he claimed it wasn't in ...

Haha, I think Bolt missed Snoink pointing out his grammar mistake. As Jigs and Surreal have already stated, it's results that matter.

Young Gun: How about you just use common sense? I'm sure you think you're very clever for finding an apparent 'loop-hole,' but I can assure you there is nothing clever ...

Rosey is completely right. Young Gun: Dude, use common sense. No all-caps means No all-caps. What about that is difficult to comprehend?

*rebumps* Also, this just made me realize I !!! a lot. *oops* Haha, as long as it's not an obsessive habit, it's cool. There are people who use triple exclamation ...

Okay! This mostly amuses me, but when I look at my profile statistics, it doesn't tell me my most active forum. I am pretty sure that's because my mere profile ...

Would it be possible to make "All-caps title" an option when reporting a post? Or is that redundant, since we have the "options" field? I'm just thinking it would be ...