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I LOVED IT! wow, such a great theme and ending sentence! You should write more of these! You gave enough decriptive adjectives and it wasn't to long (which I thank ...

Good third chapter! I really liked it! You kept it interesting and alive. I really like your characters they are really great! Can't wait to read the next chapter :) ...

Very good! I liked it! It was deep, dark and had a lot of great adjectives. I liked the more descriptive sentences they really spoke to me, the reader. Good ...

You did a good job of detailing the story. The details were not to long or to short, which I liked. You needed som commas in places but overall I ...

Hello! :) I really liked it! good job! Your character was great and very expressive, which I liked. I saw some places where you needed commas but I think someone ...

Hi! I really liked it! It was short and sweet, also very deep. It was a little confusing in the beginning but that just might be me. Good job and ...

Authors Notes: this is my first romantic short story. I'm so excited! this is also the first thing I have submitted on here. Ok, so here it goes :) Everytime ...

Hey :) I really liked it. It was a bit confusing at first. There are spelling mistakes. I liked your character Sally though. She seemed real to me. I enjoyed ...

My favorite writing tip is probably this 'Don't write for other people, write for yourself'. That one has helped me bunches! also, my imagination opens up when I'm listening to ...

My favorite soundtracks are... The Narnia movies Pirates of the caribbean Peter Pan All the disney princess movies :D

I liked it! Your character seemed real and alive. I could relate to him! Keep up the good work :)

Haha!! I was laughing when I read this! Am I the only one who gets in trouble because I stay up late writing? :D . :D :D These smilies are ...

Thanks :) Geez and I thought I was the only young writer. Boy, was I wrong :D My dream is to be a better author then CS Lewis... yeah, I ...

Hello :0) I'm a newbie. Found this site while searching for Young Writer clubs. I really like it so far! :D I LOVE Narnia and will talk with anyone about ...