Narnialover4ever1

Aww this was so sad! I felt like crying at the end! Good job and keep up the good work! The beginning was a little confusing but the ending was ...

:D Good job! My favorite part was... 'So I tell you,All of this and more. You understand and change,And you don’t walk out the door.' It was very deep :) ...

Oooh a Transformer fanfic! I liked it! It was a bit confusing, though. Good job. I like Prime Star the best :D Good job! :)

:D I really liked it! Good job on the sixth chapter! It wasn't boring and seemed alive. You might need to add some commas but overall I found it exciting, ...

:D So cute! I really liked it! Good job! 'My maiden's high up in her palace Spitting out the window My eyes shot arrows right to her face Guards chasing ...

Hello :) I liked it! very creative and it's easy to relate to! 'Most people do not rememeber a huge percentage of their dreams, but I live mine. I spend ...

:D Hey! I liked it! you seem to have a future as a singer/song writer. It's really cute and made me blush when I remeber some past crushes I had ...

Oooh really dramatic! I liked it! I'm glad this is only the prolouge because I can't wait for more! Good job and keep writing! :D

The first line, I think, was the best! Good job! I am looking forward to more of your work :D

Good job! My favorite line: In a better world, the heart would be a vessel,able to transportgood from oneto another'. It was really deep and I enjoyed it. Keep writing!

Good job! This was a great 2nd chapter and I really enjoyed it! Your characters are great! Keep up the good work :D

Good job! It was really cute! Most poems get boring at the end but yours didn't. Keep writing! :D

:D :D I like it! Great fifth chapter! It was interesting and you kept it alive (which is very hard to do). Bravo! Keep up the good work! By the ...

This made me smile! I really like this line: 'Here I'm sitting, wondering What went wrong and when 'Cause kids today just live through the Net No more games with ...

I love her innocence and sweetness! It was great! You explained everything from a little kids point of view which I really thought was great! Good job and keep up ...