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This made me laugh. You should write more of these! I really liked the humor. I think you should try a Cinderella one or a Sleeping Beauty. What was a ...

Oh I liked it!! It's really sweet and cute! When the waiter guy was say 'And maybe desert after' Desert is really spelled dessert. :) I liked it a lot!! ...

I haunt her, I know I shouldn't. Being dead is boring. It's not like I chose death. Death just happened. I was a normal seventeen year old guy, ready to ...

Great job!! I love it a lot!! 'The path treaded by Jesus pained, but it’s time we walk it' ^^ Great line!! My favorite, actually. I LOVE the Christian parts ...

I like it a lot!! Good job! I can not wait till the second chapter! :D The plot line seems very interesting :D Keep up the good work :) I'll ...

Good job!! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. The plot seems really good!! This is exactly the story I'm looking for. I like reading good work and I definetly ...

Wow extremely GREAT!! I liked it a lot!! The title caught my eye and I LOVED IT!! Good job!! Keep up the great work!! I'll be following you because I ...

Oh gosh, you got me teared up! So sweet and so romantic!!! 'One person stuck out of the people. Her once bright colored clothes were stained dark red and she ...

I LOVE THIS!!! 'Just like Cinderella,If I run, take my shoe,And like for Snow White,The birds will take this song to you.Here I send you my echo: Boy, I love ...

Geez this was sad :( But I liked it a lot! How about instead of: 'I swallowed a lump down my throat and nodded' This: I swallowed the lump in ...

Interesting! I liked it :) It was very deep but a little bit confusing at the beginning but I think that just might be me. Keep up the good work ...

Very good! This was a great and creative idea! I am looking forward to reading some other songs that you will write. 'There's something to be said for you With ...

I liked this a lot! Great job!! It was a lot better than I expected it to be and I think this might be one of my favorite stories :). ...

Good job! I liked this a lot! I read the other ones and I think this is the best yet :) 'However, nobody did anything that required much energy at ...

WOW! I want to see more scripts like this!! This should be a real play!! Great job!! The characters names are awesome! I liked the beginning :)Keep writing :)