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You wrote this in a rush? Wow- this writing is top notch, lovely descriptions and the main character is introduced well. One thing I think that should be made a ...

The two friends arrived at their mediocre school just after eight o’clock. St Luke's Secondary School was a complex of low, concrete buildings that seemed to throw the grey day ...

I really like it! Description is fantastic, the events are clear and the fast pacing works really well. You've built up a great, strong and determined character- she doesn't say ...

I love it. The introduction is really good; sets the tone of the story, and introduces the character of the surgeon very well. The character of the Count is, to ...

Hello there Young Writers. I'm really glad to be part of this amazing community, I'm sure my future with this website will be a long and prosperous one! Sorry, that ...

Colin Strider was dreaming. Again. This recurring dream had been gnawing away at his mind for the past month now. A blur of images clambered through his mind, clouded with ...