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Starting a story with the death of a character is incredibly clever; it leaves room for a lot of character development (characters turning from moping, grieving so-and-so's into strong willed ...

I've always found this question very intriguing, and I had a chance to answer it properly in a recent school project. Any thoughts and arguments on this subject would be ...

Hey, pal, I'm here to review your piece! So first of all; you're pretty good! Good action, it's interesting and the flow is pretty good. The only nitpicks I have ...

This a a story with lots of potential that hasn't really been realised yet. There is nowt much else I can say really, when all that I think should happen ...

Ooh, gruesome, I like it! You have the ability to conjure great lyrical stories, keep at it! There could have been some extra measures taken to ensure it "looks the ...

This was horrible! You're writing; pretty good! But the ideas! You have a good hand with cringe-worthy writing! It is a bit short. It could have used more description to ...

Thanks a lot! Regrettably, I've done a major edit of this chapter, and the warehouse section has been cut out, but your advice is immensely useful, with grammar, common sense ...

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Hey there! welcome to the site, hoping to see loads of writing from you in the near future :)

Well, writing for that long is certain to give you an edge! Enjoy the site!

Hi is fine! Hi is good! Can't go wrong with Hi. welcome to YWS and enjoy! :)

Evil Nyan cat? O_O Follow! Welcome to YWS- make yourself at home!

Freaking majestic! Wow- you should write more my friend- you're damn good at it! Why didn't you tell us? This is very descriptive- you've already shown us that your description ...

You know I usually oppose fanfiction (Davethepenquin is wrong, by the way, I find that fanfiction has the ability to hinder creativity. As a first story, I think that writers ...

Attracted? To a damn good (and modest) poet? :D You betcha- welcome to YWS!