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Name- Ken Kellen Age- 30 (Looks 10) Gender- Male Appearance- Extremely scruffy, has messy black hair and ever-wide, curious eyes. "Cute" in the way 10 year olds are, with small ...

The year is 2011. The place, New York City. Dark clouds have gathered over the busy streets, and strange people have started pacing the sidewalks. These people have emerged from ...

Congratulations on third place! Here is your review prize! First of all- the ideas are the best things about this piece. I can already see that the ideas you have ...

Congratulations on second place! This is your first review prize. So, first of all, I love this idea. I think the idea "makes" a horror story- and the idea of ...

Hey there, congratulations on first place! This is your second review prize. The best thing about this short story, in my opinion, is the mystery behind it. Throughout the story, ...

This was pretty cool- starts off with an interesting premise about an evil overlord killing every women, but this wavers somewhat when you introduce a rather uninteresting character. As mentioned ...

This was fast paced, and pretty exciting. Your descriptions of people are done very well, and the main character, and his friend Sam, the "kid thieves" seem like pretty interesting ...

This was well written and amusing- very enjoyable! It's amazing how much you told us about this certain character in so little words- nice job!

This was actually a very sweet piece, although it could have been a little more exciting. First of all, why should I care that the fish has died? That sounds ...

First of all, as mentioned above, capitalise the start of every line in a poem. It's a must really, otherwise it looks a little unprofessional. Also, try not to interrupt ...

Could almost be a haiku, if you get my drift. In fact- rewriting this as two, maybe three haikus would be better for this poem. It is very beautiful- you're ...

I was really irritated after reading the review above, as "DrunkOnWriting" had mentioned really the only thing that was going to nitpick about this poem, about making the long lines ...

Again, that helped me greatly- I much appreciate all your help!

Thanks a lot- it helped me immensely. According to my Geography teacher (who set me this task- weird question considering the subject right?) one of my weakest areas in arguing ...