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  • Writing Activities Re: First Paragraph Feedback

    Really confusing my kind of story Here is mine My eyes widen. I couldn't believe it. As I walked closer and closer,his eyes seem to fall apon me. "What was ...

    Jun 19, 2011


Oh my my, cowboys vs aliens - someone note the time and date, this is a historical moment (August Review Day 2025)
— Roxanne