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Re: Friends And Enemies
wow, i really like this poem. The rhyming pattern make it sound quite simple, almost childlike but when you get further on in the poem it goes from childlike to ...
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Re: Waiting
please review :) Waiting Skinny bird legs lying next to mine. The one rubbing my thigh is tapping, up and down and up and down because you are nervous about ...
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Re: Jump
wow, i love this poem! To be honest i think you haven't got any reviews because there is nothing really people would change, i for one wouldn't. Its just so ...
Jul 11, 2009 -
Re: 2 words starting with the letter"?"
Death, Desire just think those are some good words to use, could do a lot with them :) nadia
Jul 10, 2009 -
Re: Hi!
Hi, just registered my account and everything. This is so weird, I've never been around so manny people that love the same things that I do!
Jul 10, 2009 -
Re: Hello!!!
hi, i'm new to! just gotta figure out how to post something new here :( will get there in the end!
Jul 10, 2009 -
Re: Summer Is For...
aww, poor people in winter
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Re: Love
awww, aren't we all romantics at heart! Just a quick question out of curiosity, When you say "goals fall silent to lust." does this mean that ambitions disappear when your ...
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Re: Fireworks
Aww, prettiful! Fireworks are so beautiful, I didn't know you could get settings on camera's to capture them that well. Mine always come out all fuzzy :( do you think ...
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Re: Don't know how this surfaced
I used to love drawing anime drawing, it was all i ever did :) I don't think there's much point editing these as you drew they when you where eleven ...
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Re: Gold Tins
Ok, am rly confused with this. I know it's probably because I can't understand :~ But I LOVED the imagery in this poem, at the start you said "Inside this ...
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Re: Brain Storm
Okay, kind of my first review so sorry if its bad, just some things I noticed. I do like this poem but I feel its just the frame work, you ...
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Re: Blood Lust
First piece i've put on here :), you guys are all scarily good at writing The first time I heard you speak, your words flew around the long hallways in ...
Jul 10, 2009
