Nadia

I totally agree with your it, this is a great story. I haven't read anything like it even though it's quite an overused idea, of the whole superpower thing. But ...

Um, it's hard to see it because of the light quality. I don't really know much about cats but I agree with you that the markings are off. You just ...

I loved this, it was just very easy and natural to read. Are you going to make it in a multichapter story, because at the moment it seems a bit ...

I know you said no one would understand this and to be far I didn't but I am intrigued, You said at the beginning that this was the third book, ...

Thanks, to everyone. I didn't think I'd get any reviews so this is great. I'm gonna try to make the corrections now :) Nadia

Name:Rennie Race: Ursine Race Appearance: Dark hair and eyes, light brown skin. Personality : Very passive and shy, doesn't stand out in the crowd but desperately wants to. Beliefs : ...

is no one gonna review?

I like the first one the best, also as above the wooden floor would be a good idea. You could also try this on marble, I think it would create ...

umm.... npt sure why you took a picture of your laptop. I don't think this is the best picture use for symbolism as you can't really see whats on the ...

thankyou for the review darko.demark666, kind of scared me at first but ummm, helped loads in the end. I've corrected/changed most of the things you said, there's just something I ...

the fact that edward is so protective of bella, for once if would be nice if he didn't give a toss :)

ok, if you don't kno what swine flu is yet then you either live in an omish community or don't own a television. You know swine flu, that flu pandemic ...

Hi miriam, am pretty new so you'll have to bear with me :S I really loved this poem, its open to alot of speculation from the reader as the setting ...

8/10 because that is one cool signature but i'm not sure i understand the point of it or where it's from :s

5/10 i know everyone loves neverland but i just can't help thinking of michael jackson when i read that :S