NaRachel

Hey :) Wow. This looks like it was very carefully thought out and must have taken a long time to write- i wouldn't know because i've never written rap but ...

Ooooooh clever :) Must admit i had to google who it was- my excuse being that I'm Australian and i don't watch the news (neither of which are valid)....lol ANYWAY ...

I just don’t really understand. I try to add all the bits up together but they keep contradicting each other. The negative’s and positive’s cancel out which equals zero-nothing. I ...

Oh my god, yes its me again. Sorry if my reviews are annoying you, but i was just going through lyrics and yours is coming up quite a bit. Ok ...

Hey :) I think I just reviewed another one of your pieces, awks if it wasn't yours but anyway. I really liked this, it flowed really good-the rhythm and rhyming ...

Hey :) I liked it!! I think the part i liked so much was the rhythm, it just flowed really brilliantly. Despite having never heard the tune i was humming ...

Hi :) This would make a really good song- but as a poem I'm not 100 % sure. Its really good in terms of ideas and emotion but it just ...

Hey :) This is really, really beautiful. It has this earthy simplicity to it and yet there's the constant metaphor of the girl being the flower which makes it simply ...

Oh my gosh i'm sorry to say i've become a bit of a post-aholic lately *correction = write-aholic. I've really become quite fixated with this series of short stories. Just ...

Ok so since the last two pieces i've really changed the tense. Hoping it hasn't impaired it :? I've made some additions and edits since the last post so if ...

Hey :) This is good, it really creates a kind of monster/dragon/stone age, i don't know how to describe it (i'm thinking along the lines of books like eragon). Anyway ...

Just realised i completely forgot to put in the italics- no wonder it didn't make sense! Thanks for pointing this out to me :) I added some more breaks too.

This is a bit of a sequel to "I miss him" but you don't have to have read that to understand this. If you have read the first part then ...

Ok this is awkward because i just accidentally "liked" my own piece :/... i don't know how to "unlike" it so i just wanted to make sure people didn't think ...

Hey :) I agree its, interesting.... But i don't mean that in a way where someone doesn't like something and instead of being honest they say its interesting. Quite the ...