NaRachel

I meant "cliche " damn autocorrect :)

Hi :) I agree with the other reviewers. I thought it was great! Completely captured all my emotions and put them into words. I really loved your second verse, it ...

Hi :) im not a regular poetry person so if i've put this in the wrong genre let me know... She walks inside of me Between shredded muscle and fractured ...

Hey :) you should put this in the lyrics section in misc. Work if its a rap :)

Come clean to who you are Come clean To all your scars Wash clean The tattoos on your heart Wring them out to dry Peg them up with a lie ...

This is just a nightmare That I don't wanna have again This has left me frightened But I stuck it out to the end This was just a misunderstanding From ...

Ok :) so i posted this because i'm not sure about it. I have two ways of writing songs: 1. I write the lyrics and then can never find a ...

Sighhhhhhhhh. Now i got that out of the way :)... You know that feeling you get every now and then where you read something and your whole mind just goes ...

This made me want to cry and I don't cry easy so Well done. There was something really touching about the "I'm sorry's" - there's someone who I wish I ...

Hey :) I really liked it! It had passion, and you pulled of that passion with some genuine rhyming and quality so well done!! :) The only part i'm not ...

Hey guys :) This is the concluding piece to the other 5 romance short stories that i have written, once again i emphasise that it should (if i've written it ...

Hi :) Ambiguos yet effective. It created sinister feelings and repulsion- in a very good way. The short lines are really interesting! I really like this part: anti-freeze, dribble down ...

Oh my god its you again!! Haha i saw the title and felt I had to read it, so well done with making an interesting title to start of with! ...

Hey :) First of all, your too young to be thinking about love! Haha i'm only kidding.The whole thing looks like you wrote it in a little bit of a ...

Awesome and no problems, now your poem is as pretty and sad as a forlorn flower. Haha ok I know that's lame. Anyway good job :)