NaRachel

I agree with Bryr in that it is soft and mournful. Its a pretty poem with a great meaning to it. You seem to be really good at that, putting ...

Hey i just reviewed your poem and thought i'd check out what your other post was. I'm disappointed that its not another poem but oh well. It seems we share ...

First of all AWWWWW. Now that I've got that out the way, it has a really great rhythm and it almost sounds like a song. It has a simple but ...

Hey Toto25, First of all it is a gripping title which although verge's on the side of cliche is a great start! Also i would like to say add more ...

I'd failed to see the dust particles :)

Hey i'm not much of an expert on poetry but i think it was great! I especially liked the repetition of "Soldier" Nice storyline. Almost sounded like a song. It ...

Hey this is a Shakespearean sonnet i had to write for school about nature. This is my first sonnet and first bit of poetry in ages so tell me what ...

First of all this it has a really excellent beginning, very catchy, well done! Then i continued to read it and thought wow! I originally thought that your sentences were ...

Hey i like this song but i can't help feeling thats its cliche and possibly corny. Give me your thoughts. All these things Who i'm gonna be What i'm gonna ...

Hey i like how the sentences( i call them sentences but you could say lines) are short. I didn't really get the confusement. I love this bit So I may ...

Hey i read/reviewed your last chapter and have to say that once again i am positively impressed (although slightly jealous of your writing technique. It is consistently good. I found ...

Very good and unique. I understand the meaning behind most of it though some bits i'm unsure about. I think some bits sound like they're just being said (more like ...

Hey thanks for the spelling tip. Sorry but i don't think i'm quite up to broadcasting myself on youtube i'll let you know if i change my mind though

Hey i think you have a really good writing style that sounds almost professional when you read it. You use just the right amount of big words and small words ...

Anyone who has read the previous chapters of the story should know that I've skipped through about 60 pages and just posted the chapter that I've most recently posted( before ...