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Re: Oh the beautiful land
Hi everyone. I thought i'd try some poetry, or more i didn't think and somehow got inspired to write poetry. Anyway i don't really know which catergory it fits into ...
Aug 6, 2010 -
Re: American Dreams remake
Okay so i did this story for school. Basically we got told that we had to create a story based on a story by Peter Carey from "collected stories". So ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: Harry Potter- What happened after death, chapter 6
Harry woke up to a musty smell which made his sinuses feel slightly clogged. He felt uncomfortable having slept in Mrs Figg’s spare bed but he felt he should be ...
Jun 29, 2010 -
Re: Harry Potter- What happened after death, chapter 5
“Why do they come here?” asked Mrs Figg. “They’ve been here before?” asked Harry. “Oh yes, a whole range of different reporters each has a little look around and then ...
Jun 10, 2010 -
Re: Harry Potter- What happened after death, chapter 4
Thanks again for reading:)
May 6, 2010 -
Re: Harry Potter- What happened after death, chapter 4
Emerald hooted, waking Harry up, for a short time he thought he was back at the Dursley’s with Hedwig. As much as he hated the Dursley’s it was a rather ...
May 1, 2010 -
Re: Before They Say Goodnight
b-bm b-bm b-bm, is what my heart is doing right now, That last part was sooo intense and i'v e never read anything so shocking on yws. Can i first ...
Apr 18, 2010 -
Re: Aether ~Hope's Light~
WOW. I really, really, really liked it. I'm not a poetry technician but i would say you've really got the poetry/imagery thing down pat. Well done, it was really beautiful. ...
Apr 17, 2010 -
Re: Harry Potter- What happened after death, chapter 3
“Harry,” Hermione said hushed, waking him up. “Wha-“said Harry, blindly looking around. “Sorry I thought you were awake,” she whispered. “Meet me outside in the hallway,” “Okay,” s
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: Untitled - part 1
First of all, you stole my title for my story. Lol. Nice beginning i believe a story always needs an attention-catching opening. However your verging on introducing too many characters ...
Apr 8, 2010 -
Re: Harry Potter- What happened after death, chapter 2
Harry didn’t read the newspaper that came a week after. He didn’t read any newspapers anymore. He had always had to deal with fame but now he had become some ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: Harry Potter- What happened after death, chapter 1
Just so you know this starts after the last chapter of the seventh book and BEFORE the nineteen years later bit. chapter 1: Harry woke up, bruised and battered. He ...
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: I can't do it, I can't move on
Hey i originally wrote this as a song but i can't seem to make a melody that fits so i'm wondering what you think of it as a poem. Should ...
Mar 7, 2010 -
Re: Oh star
First of all i always love a "Slow, melodic, kind of soft" song. For the first verse: Very nice start( oh star, oh star) Its almost got a dear diary ...
Mar 7, 2010 -
Re: Seattle
First of all its really sad and brought out real emotion in me so well done for that. I really, really liked it. From the moment i started reading i ...
Mar 6, 2010
