NYCnightowl007

I totally know how you feel when posting a story for the first time. I know my writings often do feel like my children. But if I were you, I ...

Hey there! First off, I think this song is a little bit redundant. You say falling angel or angel a lot, and even though it's the point of the song, ...

Hey! I really like the song but it seems a bit choppy in parts. Smooth it up a bit and it'll be perfect. I do love it though. The chorus ...

@suicidallybeautiful don't worry about it. I thank you for your criticism! Thanks to everyone else, too. :) Chrissie

Hello there. The first thing that caught my eye was the name - it's really intriguing and that's why I clicked on it. :) I feel a little like the ...

Hey there, welcome to YWS! I hope you like the site so far. This song was a bit cliche. Like we've heard it all before kinda deal. But the words ...

VERSE ONE: you got your stick of dynamite your ace up your sleeve ready for a good fight has no one told you yet? someone spilled someone told and your ...

I agree with @thefireinmeisJC: it is a tad cliche. I also find the whole a little short, almost like I'm expecting something else, but it never comes. Maybe you could ...

This really doesn't have a chorus, verses or a bridge. Maybe you guys could pick out your favorite paragraph. Thanks a ton, Chrissie. P.S. Sorry it's so long; I was ...

First off, this song is something I would download in my MP3 player. I would listen to it. It is very original, even though the topic is very familiar. It's ...

Hey. The first thing off is that your title caught my attention, which is awesome "curb appeal", if you will. The first part was a tad confusing, as in that ...

Hey. The verses need some work, but I hope you love it anyways. Cheers. 1. songwriter how do you weather the storm I know how the words keep you so ...

Hey. I wrote this song for someone who will always be very dear to my heart. I hope you like it. ♥Chrissie. 1. crazy my eyes are wide open maybe ...

Hey. I wrote this song last year when I was twelve. A lot of my friends said that they liked it so I thought I'd put it on to see ...

I had to split this in two because posting it all in one was really, really long. I added a tad more to the end but that's it. I'm in ...