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Hi! My short story is about ghosts, would I post that under Sci-Fi fiction or Fantasy? Thanks! P.S. sorry if this is the wrong place to ask! Just thought I'd ...

I feel as if I have recently become extremely sober As if before this point, I had been under the influence of some hazy, murky configuration I am too winded ...

Hello! Everyone deserves a fair review, full of good comments, and things that the author needs to work on. I try to be as positive as possible and I won't ...

Hello! I loved your title so I just had to come see what it was all about. Things You could Improve On: --Your first sentence doesn't really draw the writer ...

Hello! My name's Christina and I'll be reviewing your story this fine Saturday. Things to Improve Upon: -In the second letter that she starts writing to her mom, the longer ...

Hello! Do you review poems? If you could review mine, that'd be lovely. Thanks! :D

Okay, thank you. :)

Hello! I was going to just make a whole new account of YWS under a new username, to save the hassle of changing my current one, but then I realized ...

I wish this car didn't have to take me there, I wish that the compass on its dash didn't have to always point north, The pavement, the streets, They only ...

Sorry this is so long, I tried to shorten the chapter by splitting it, but I guess it's just long. Enjoy! My mood didn't improve when I got to the ...

Thanks everyone! I will take what you all said and try and use the points in my revision of the piece! :D

Yeah, I meant the graphic ones. :D But how is it written?

For my journalism class, we had to write an opinion article about something that effects teens nationally. I also wrote a blog about this a couple months ago. If you're ...

Hello there! This is a potential preface to a novel I'm working on. It's a tad dark, but only because I'm experimenting with different things. I hope you enjoy! It ...

Calligraphy didn't put one, so: It didn't end the way it started.