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NLPrincess13

  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Floral stains, Cats and Love trains

    Floral stains, Cats and Love trains I can almost smell the loneliness or is that just my future cats running around purring unstoppably communicating with me when humans cease to ...

    Apr 22, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Just Listen...

    i am with the last reviewers . it's repetitive and got no aim in the end......... but keep up, show us more :D

    Apr 22, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A Masterpiece

    that's a big advice to every girl or boy, still hesitated about how beautiful and amazing she or he is. it touches the heart Beautifully written , Simply a master ...

    Apr 22, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I Hate Love Poems

    I love it, love it, love it,............... Keep up,............i like it the way it's..

    Apr 22, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The After

    very good, naturally reflected to me ....................Keep up, :D:D:D

    Apr 22, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: too scared to let you go

    it's good, the song was aspiring. it just to be organized more!!!!!. use a word soft were to write then post it here, it helps :D anyway, Keep up!!! very ...

    Apr 22, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: As I did, so did you

    i agree with Esthar , the reader or the listener...... need to feel the emotions more than consistent curses. you should add something more in the end a verse. to ...

    Apr 22, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: What A Lovely Life

    Very good, the style is very rich.......... the stories mixed to complete a great scene!!! thumbs up, keep up your work :D:D:D:D

    Apr 22, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: The ballad of the dove

    The Ballad of the Dove Verse 1: The soft cooing of the dove Turns louder and louder She is locked into this cage She just wonders, Of how she got ...

    Apr 22, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Make Believe

    Standing ovation!!!! :D:D:D i like it very much :D:D

    Apr 22, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Unique Story : Heart OR Brain !!

    first i greet you for the idea, but i got to say it can be taken in more developed angels........ i like it the way the information accessed the style, ...

    Apr 22, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Unknown Love

    GOOD JOB, keep up....................:D:D

    Apr 22, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Interduction

    Hi guys, i am Sarah from Egypt. i am 18 years old.i am an aspiring writer, well i hope so. I've been writing since a long time , but i ...

    Apr 22, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Conflict

    "I still the remember," i think maybe it's "i still remember" anyway, it just stopped me. i love it, it's good.............:D:D keep up

    Apr 22, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Best Friend..yeah right

    "Right then an arrow hit my heart, spewing out with blood. " my fav line :D:D:D KEep up girl, tears lit in my eyes while reading it . yes i've ...

    Apr 22, 2011


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