NLPrincess13

i agree with Sage about that stanza , it stopped the flow. i loved the message and i think every country in the world TODAY!! can relate to. i love ...

We say things we never mean And we are good at falling back into a routine It just so happens that I am changing the dominos Rearranging, please stop falling ...

I agree with Tamara .. you need to make it longer to make a complete scene of the poem. it's good.... Keep up :D

it's sad, you need to slightly increase the flood of emotions with words...... but i felt it it's very good. Keep up the good work...:D:D

P.s. NL is abbreviation to Neverland, My name is Sarah. :D:D:D Just for the record! :D thanks for the lovely replies makes me happy :D

"Candle Light" The scented Orchids float to the pearl's gate Breaking sunshine elaborated the shades Gravity put them into a maze To change their ride to the unknown lands Further ...

Just not now for a better view, i think "But not now". Just won't add much with now in the sentence. Kind of how it hurts to know you gave ...

i can feel th emotion of pain here, but i can tell you it's not selfishness. sometimes we lose our senses in the middle of our yearning voices, it could ...

Loved it, amazing, great................ i want more of this. like a daily dose Keep up, it's totally promising !!!! More please.:D:D

i want to be Stella, please.....................Please, please!!! :D i love it adore it, amazing! :D:D:D:D Keep up, write to us more :D:D

Love the cherry blossoms , very lovely! and very cute puppy...:D:D

WOW!!!!! well, i can describe it, but you are absolutely talented. Keep up, please My fav is the first and last one and the second too.....:D:D:D

Good, Great one!....keep up :D

True passion can reflect here. AMAZING!!, i love it, i love the way it flows and the way you still believed you got to choose the wrong thing there even ...

Completely beautiful, i felt the words and the emotion within. my first favorite poem here on YWS.:D Keep up the good work :D:D