NLPrincess13

Thanks ADream!!! Thank you guys for all the positive comments :D

Thanks, Dude! :D

I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT :D i can sense the flow. i can't see there is a need to fix anything.! :D Keep up and update us with more!

Thanks you Brook. that would be awesome if you review some of my work and you can make yourself comfortable! :D and that's an official to everyone to review i ...

i agree with Thal, "i see the excitement and the grief in your eye" excitement doesn't match the feeling of grief :D in over all very good well done, look ...

very good!!! i like it very much..... :D quiet simple and very emotion, i can feel its very close friend too :D good work :D keep up the good work!

unforgettable moment As Wide as the sky appears to me everyday . i wish god to disappear and never be found for infinity. I have to tell you that my ...

i can sense its emotion, completely depressing feeling flows there and the pain clearly shows in your words. very good , keep up...... :D

WELL DONE!!! :D i like it very much :D:D, but there some fixes need to be done.you spoke about you inner thoughts more than the state of the event and ...

i can relate to it, i get my share of being bullied too!.... i like it.... keep up the good work :D

WOW!! every time i read it i feel something new. i love it very much, well done! there is just the punctuation you should look to, but it's good. i ...

i think it got the meaning, but the flow isn't has its best emotion. try to reach inside you more! :D keep up, it's good :D:D:D

it flows perfectly :D, it can easily evoke the emotions loved it!! keep up, can't wait for more pieces!!

thank you guys!!!... yeah i thought that there could be other words to be replaced! :D thank you again!! :D

Well, It's creatively Unique! i loved it..... Keep up, can't wait for more pieces! :D