NLPrincess13

i think you might did better, first the flow doesn't exist!! you need to consider your dividing to stanzas. i mean the emotion was whinning. you lost the rue feelings ...

thanks, yeah i think your thought has a point :D thanks again :D!!!

first of all, well done i like your style very much! i love the poem. the flow of the emotion perfectly matching the meaning, i like the subject point too! ...

I am in, my first challenge! finger crossed :D

I felt I'm watching tinker bell or something. the plot is very good, i like your idea of it.... love it, it should be part 2 or something! :D keep ...

i with "DreamWalker" it should be moved to the general fiction ! i loved it , it's realistic and sadly it is! any way well done, i love it once ...

well, it's good piece, but i think you can do better. yes it makes sense as (the reviewers mentioned). the flow was good! but, you can add some back up ...

well it's featured now! isn't it? any way i love love love it! good choice, it fits me too perfectly! i laugh it out loud while reading cause it was ...

first of all, i have to read it twice to get it like it should be and it worth it! *raise my hat* Well done with your choice of stanzas. ...

hi, first i loved it, truly loved it. my heart twitch and i got goose bumps(in good way of course). i loved it *standing ovation* miss, EM. i love the ...

Hi, well done on your poem. i like the flow here and the voice in it. very good meaning! though these lines stopped me and it seems good , but ...

HI, first of all well done, it was pretty and simple. i like your pictures a lot and the imagination there is cute. i like sometimes in each stanza. i ...

hi, i can say it's flood of emotion out there, i think you did well. very well actually! i sense a bit dramatic scarcity in the boy tune "the narrator ...

Great!, i am first.... so here my points on the poem Somewhere, life is as perfect i think this line is good but "as" here weaken it. it'd be better ...

Introduction - Cold as the summit of the Alps…..she couldn't deny that fact. How she hovers around her life??!!! It's ridiculous to figure out how you lost your strength so ...