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Re: First Love
Thank you so much for your feedback!! It really helped and I look forward to reading your pieces.
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Re: A dead man's last wish
Hi I'm new to YWS and I really enjoyed this piece! I love how you sum up everything that man lives for and that really keeps us motivated to be ...
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Re: Where Are You?
Wow this is really beautiful; so honest and vivid. I love the images I get from it and how the rhyming works. Keep it up :)
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: First Love
The pure glow of your magnificent smile Your eyes blue as sky as they illuminate mine Your every detail from your toes to your face The rough gentle kiss in ...
Mar 12, 2011
