MythWriter99

Thanks, but I wasn't going for panic, I wanted to show how the main character was a survivor and a darn good one at that. Lot's have people have told ...

Well the reason why I gave Zander a hardened personality is because I wanted to show how she started out this broken person but then by helping Jenny she heals ...

Hmm I see what you mean. I just have trouble with the fear factor. Writing this peace was actually a school assignment for my creative writing class. We were supposed ...

Oh, I see what you mean. thanks for pointing that stuff out. I'll make sure to fix that. Thanks for reading.

Oh sorry for the typo, I'll fix that. Thank you for reading, I'll post the next chapter soon. Yeah I tried to make Zander seem commanding and a little intimidating.

Yeah I like making characters act immaturely. I think it's annoying when people are like 'she isn't realistic' well news flash I write about fairies and vampires so of coarse ...

Alright I get what you mean about Zanders character being sort of . . . stiff. But i meant to do that. you see Zander's entire family is gone and ...

Thanks for the help. And just so you know Zander is a chick, her name is short for Alexandra. And the reason why the character seem so used to the ...

Thanks for reviewing it. I appreciate the through review, it's really helpful.Yeah I like the name Zander too, but it's actually shirt for the characters full name Alexandra. I heard ...

Hey Adriana12Alexis, did you read the prologue, because it might help with what you said about the characters being odd. You know give you some reasoning for why the main ...

Why thank you. Yeah this was my first post and well I hadn't thought about posting it in sections. Thank you for reading my story. I appreciate the feedback.

Well this is one of my favorite stories that I have read on YWS. It's funny, interesting and really entertaining. I look forward to reading more. My favorite part is ...

Why thank you. I'm happy you liked it! Thanks for reading!

I like the piece, it's probably that most suspenseful thing I've written in a while. I'm just getting frustrated because no matter how hard I try to write something good ...

Okay so I apologize for all of the stupid typing errors. I wrote the piece fairly quickly and should have read over it again before I submitted it. Still getting ...