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I was always the opposite. I hated writing description of characters and concentrated more on how they behaved what what kind of language they used. People confuse flowery language with ...

Sorry it took so long for me to look this over, Dreamy. I like the scene. You introduced Kyra as being care but she doesn't feel sympathetic towards Shan. I ...

I really hate writing beginnings. I try to put too much into it or sometimes too little that readers start asking too many questions. I would suggest writing up what ...

Its just what I need to figure out Monessa. By the way, I like how the questions refer to the character as 'her' and then swtiches to 'him'. Thanks Dusky!

There is only one character that is being killed off but he has to die for the story to work out because of related issues to betrayal. Other than that ...

I use Word Web Online , it is really helpful and I like the layout.

Codex by Lev Grossman Fingersmith by Sarah Waters And an old favourite of mine: Goodnight Mister Tom by Michelle Magorian

That's erm.. pretty gruesome. I can almost picture it. If you wanted the reader to have their own 'image' of what was described by Welcome you succeeded.

That's just what I need to do when writing very short stories. So thanks for that, Dreamy.

Try techno and classical. Or just a mixture of music you like and don't like.

I always had trouble with affect and effect. Thanks mini-dictionary :D

Is the story based in a fictional world or ours? I've read a book set in our world with witches, vampires, etc, all living in secret and some humans know ...

I actually took my time to read all this, especially the grammar and punctuation as I sometimes still have trouble with it. Thanks!

I've been told I write in a 'simple' style and not use too many big words. I do usually listen to all kinds of music when I write and I ...

Thanks Snoink! I'll try this will one of my novels which at the moment is going nowhere.