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Monessa struggles to help a dying Sebastian That is very wrong, however: Monessa can’t help but laugh at Sebastian Afraid of change, Monessa avoids success This is more like it.

My school never closed for anything and you had to be there or the school phoned up to check you weren't skiving. Yeah, I missed one day in Year 7 ...

I saved this on my computer, lately I've sucked at critiquing and I think I ranted once, or twice, but I do hope the writer actually does take time to ...

Comments/Corrections I use green for comments and corrections--spelling mistakes,questions and things I liked/disliked. Suggestion Sometimes I come across sentences that are hard to swallow or can be

I agree with 4 and 5. But my characters run free and take charge while I watch chaos wash over everything I've written.

I do that a lot without realising and I hate having to rewrite. I leave it in for my brother to spot them.

You could try browsing through local newspapers or magazines. I would do the same but they don't accept anyone under 21. :evil: Some libraries also have information so you can ...

I haven't read what the others have said but every one has two sides. There is good in 'evil' people, even if it is a very small part of them. ...

I agree that it is hard. But I have come to know my chapters and characters so well I let them do the writing, I now find editing fun (and ...

I've only ever done this once with Curiosity and it worked. But it was a very short storie and the Unicorn is a novel, right? I think it really depends ...

O use names that I like. Sometimes they are made up, like Wineberry but it sounds like an ordinary name.

I couldn't possibly give advice for this. I rush all the time and look back at what I've written the next day, that's when I edit all the bits that ...

Stephen King's On Writing is a very excellent text. No, really! That was really helpful, I was reading over it during summer.

I admit I get bored over my work once I've finished writing them. No one at home wants to read my work so I get lazy and never bother to ...

I like what you've come up with and sorry I can't be much of a help. It should be interesting to write and good luck with it.