Myth

Green = Comment/Correction Black = Review * I walked around the corner of the dark, moon-lit alleyway, my fist clenched around the handle of the blood drenched metal hammer. I ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * Sera stood, coming to sit on the ground beside the cot he laid in. ‘laid’ = lay “Well, that was ...

Are you planning to do anything further with Switch #1 ?

103? I'll be so old then... I can always steal a young soul XD Update : I've got my second rejection, looks like Curiosity isn't favoured much by editors. *sighs*

*ponders* Jumped a bridge. Wait, I think there are others... ~Aethel .: What is the most stupidest thing you've ever done?

Oh, that is so horrible to look at! *turns away*

Brenna : I know how you feel, I've had enough of suitors. Aethel : Hello. I don't know where you got this number from, but if you're selling 'matons stay ...

Peal

Love the armour, though the shoulders remind me of the awful 80's style. The only thing that I think is wrong[?] is the X strap, the top right one needs ...

A normal day for me but I did leave a message on someone's phone.

Welcome Nate! It's Myth and I love your avatar, he [or she?] is cute! :mrgreen:

Good luck if you decide to rewrite it. At the moment it is a bit like a summary of what is to come. Like you had to give an idea ...

I think the dragon probably needs a saddle or something, I mean, wouldn't it hurt? Like horse riding? I like the boy's expression. And the river should be just a ...

I think I'll do this when NaNo comes round.

"What is that?" Aethel picked up the sparkling wrapper. "I don't know. Looks like 20 Cen. junk. Just stop fooling around, we have to get the 'matons out of here." ...