Myth

I love all three dress, nice colours too. I think the first girl's left hand is not as great as her right hand, you could work on that by looking ...

Thanks for looking into it, Clau.

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * The streets were covered with black ice and frost. I imagine ice and frost are white, why black? Is it ...

How do I go about asking this? Mrs Tandy gave in to her daughter’s look and only worried about what the neighbours would say. This is usually how I write ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * Louis twisted his mouth in an amused smile [to himself] at the thought. Not necessary, but maybe take that out? ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * Just an hour ago, Tony had been in a dark alley of downtown. I think the ‘of’ is unnecessary. Try ...

Hello, hello, hello! I'm Myth. Nice to see you, and your character reminds me of my own rebellious lot. I also love trees, dogwood and cherry are my favourites. See ...

Vaz'rrah really stands out of the picture, compared to the background which is simple and not too detailed.

I like the comedy and tragedy one.

Welcome BS, I'm Myth--not a puny mortal :mrgreen: I don't think anyone ever taught me how to write a story,which is why I end up with a few random scenes ...

Hello and welcome! Biology? I think Fish takes that, you'll see her around after half-term. Anyway, I also love fantasy and a bit of everything else. I'm Myth, I'm on ...

Myth, You know, that punch really hurt. I just hope you got some sleep last night because from now on I'll be composing your dreams. And you're not going to ...

I really LOVE sundae, the pier scene and the windchime. I hope you post more :mrgreen:

I'm not desperate for anything. ~Aethel .: Do I know you?

Well... That already happens, I guess I'll just grow up to be a miserable old biddy. What would you do if you became President of the world?