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The great thing is you can look at the picture from every angle. It looks a lot like thick smoke than clouds.

Just wonderful. I can't wait to see the inked version. He seems to have chicken-ish legs though.

That is so sad. I love his books!

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * 'Bring me the girl.' Maybe other girl would be better since the robots are getting rid of a different girl ...

I recommend anything by Elizabeth Gaskell.

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * Her boots thudded against the plush carpet as she trooped the other side of the hallway. Thudded? Plush carpet? Sound ...

I really liked the beginning, Gazza, and since it was so short I was able to whiz through the whole thing. Limited time here so I'll only go over a ...

I love it, his shoes look better in this version =]

My favourites are number 1 and 4. The first photograph focuses on the flower so I think you should have centred it rather than have it almost out of reach. ...

The trees so great! I love it. The guy's shoes look really flat like squashed bread or something.

I love the upside down one. I recently bought a camera so I know how fun it is =]

It's a lot simpler so thanks Nate, as always! =]

Green = Comment Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * “Ahhhh! When are they gonna let us in! I’m gonna die!” Race shouted. A couple of girls looked over at ...

Green = Comment Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * “It’s too hot!” said an eleven-year-old boy. His thirteen-year-old brother nodded his head in agreement. “Yeah, if it is too ...

I don't know. Do you want me to size up my meals? I'll go for large. ~Aethel .: Who would you really like to kick?