Myth

Granted. But now you've lost your appetite. I wish we didn't have so many mirrors in the house!

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * He slid as far away from her as he could, and looked at the city that had just left faded ...

Rice. ~Aethel .: Have you ever won competitions of any kind?

From Are You Me? * [Southern 36th Level] “Are you me?” She slumped to the floor as the recurring head made her faint, staring across her prison to the girl ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = review * Letter Post "So do I," I giggled. "Would you like me to write Mum the note or do you wish ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * She twisted a piece of her long hair around her finger and looked at me anxiously. ‘piece’ is wrong, I ...

Hello Ink! Love your name and the avatar. I'm Myth! See you around.

Imp, I'd love to :mrgreen:

Find some way out of it. Or try to dance like the gorgeous Madhubala! What would you say if your favourite writer asked you to work on a book with ...

"You won't sleep or you can't sleep?" "No." Paron unhinged his jaw, an act to show his suprise. Aethel ignored him, watching holo coverage. "I'll get you some pills." "No, ...

Green = Comment/Correction Black = Review * It didn’t matter that his features were blunt, wide cheekbones and deepset eyes. Wouldn’t there be a dash between ‘deep’ and ‘set’? Of ...

All the time *sighs* ~Aethel .: Do you believe in God[s]?

Thank you! You could do that, just enoguh so the snippet doesn't really rely on the background for the reader to understand.

Thank God for Jenna :wink:

Get out, isn't that obvious? ~Aethel .: Do you know what a trash compactor is?