Myth

Hello Spark! I'm Myth. I love English and History, if you need anything let me know. See you! :mrgreen:

Quite gloomy, but I like it. Your friend doesn't look too happy =]

Tea, juice and water!

Welcome Cookie! Your name is fun, and delicious. I'm Myth. PM me if you need help! :mrgreen:

Paul Weller from The Jam! I love them =]

Dragon. No. Monkey =]

Uh - I don't know much about history. I can tell you, though, it wouldn't be Alluston. ~Aethel .: Do you get into arguments over nothing?

I've had to do this with someone afraid of heights and claustrophobic. I'll have to rrewite it, and thank you for including the passgae, Clau, now I know what it ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * I looked at it and it read six o’clock. Maybe you could take out the bits before the second ‘it’: ...

Blinded by light, she squinted, tears welling up. "Hello?" she called out. Moments later she heard the scuffling of boots, the girl laughing. "I need water," "Oh?" Mocking girl. False ...

Green = Comment/Correction Black = Review * Their expressions [s]were ones[/s] of blissful satisfaction, expressions she had never seen on a human being before. I feel as if this could ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * The city was dazzling 4 years ago. Better to have the number written out. The skyscrapers peeping out from the ...

Fishface : Like Imp said this is a sketch, doesn't really go into the story and I'd really appreciate it if you'd give suggestions on improving the piece. Thanks, Imp.

Charles Townshend (1725 - 1767) The Townshend Act was passed just before his death. But Wikipedia seems to call him Townsend and Townshend, don't know what's going on there XD ...

Hello GR! I loved Heat , and would like to see you post Undercurrent —or just the character sketches.