Myth

I love the colours in the last two pictures. The green 'hole' in the first image isn't really impressive, it looks random, out of place and I think it was ...

Green = Comment/Correction Black = Review * I couldn’t help but noticing that they hadn’t actually included Jack Ashby – that little slip-up might have been too strange even for ...

Sounds like romance, which I'm not a fan of, about teenaged girls and their 'perfect guy'. I don't think I'd pick it up. Industrial

Sari : This is the old thread and the old post which you didn't need to critique. Most of the changes were already made in the new version: Any further ...

Sounds like a mix of fantasy and sci-fi. Maybe a twilight duel or something? I'd pick it up depending on the first few pages. Are You Me?

"This one smells worse than the others," Aethel said. Cassie and Alex stared at her. "I'm not being rude, all right? I just—" Scraping of metal grinding interupted her. The ...

I like long ones and short ones. And some that end with questions =]

Lovely name. I guess she'd probably wear a lot of green dresses, curly red hair and very blue eyes. Aethel

The day I found Stitches. That was a good one. ~Aethel .: What memory would you rather wipe from your mind?

Hello Lechuza! Welcome to the Site! I'm Myth. If you need any help PM me. =] See you around.

Reminds me of staying awake at all hours and waiting for a specific time for something special to happen. I'd read it, sounds like my life anyway. Half-Knot Stitches

Nothing. ~Aethel .: How would you go about getting revenge? Or wouldn't you bother?

Sounds something like The Runners or maybe Logan's Run . I'd pick it up. Industrial

I tried frying an Aloo Puri, it burnt. ~Aethel .: Can you use a computer? Do you know what one is?

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * “We hear you [.] ” yawned Tip, ruffling his blond hair and slapping his hat on. Period should be a ...