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The wings are really good but the rest of the body needs a little more work, especially the torso--it loooks pretty naked at the moment. Add a bit more flesh/fat ...

I prefer the second one, looks real and so adorable. the first one looks too flat and squashed, use more space to show off the legs, ears, etc.

That's beautiful--love the dew on the blades, the sky, trees edging towards the sky.

I love the distorted one, the group picture and Shawney! The only photographs I take are of other peoples houses =]

Blood Red, Snow White by Marcus Something — over three months now and I still haven't finished ... Charlie Bone Series by Jenny Nimmo =]

I may be a little late but I'd like to back everyone else. Read different chapters each day and see if there is something you should take out or add ...

Another Photo! My Corpse Bride book, signed by Mark Salisbury the writer of the book. I just love showing off about this!!! I want that book! But most of all ...

Peregrine falcon! But you'd probably never find a vegetarian falcon...

Happy New Year[s]! Fireworks this year weren't so great. 1 — Finish Are You Me? 'cause those characters are giving me a headache. 2 — Get something published. 3 — ...

At last, some explaination as to who this Fineena is. Good luck, no matter how long it takes to get written, you'll post something and let me know!

Try reading science fiction! Research always helps whatever genre you prefer, you wouldn't write historical fiction without knowing a little [or a lot] about the era your work is set ...

I love the bridge. It would be a whole lot better if the picture was clearer, darker in areas as it all looks neutral at the moment.

I love the wings and his hair but the background seems so dull--I'd have expected a more dramatic scene--and his legs look awkward positioned in that way. Hope to see ...

Before it's too late I might as well add something. Thank you to everyone, your stories/novels have given me something to do for the last year or so. Nate : ...

Hello! For the revised version you should definitely add description and character action. They're not just standing there delivering their lines like, say, robots and this should also give an ...