Myth

Green = Comment/Correction Black = Review * It was a weary day, just off the coast of London , far from all the notorious aristocrats. Does London have a coast? ...

Paron : *checks date* I guess you've not been alive for a very long time. 'Maton is shorted from automaton. And I do know English, thank you very much. Brenna ...

I just made it as Epic Novelist! :mrgreen:

[Should we have a list of who posts? Like Cloudy first, someone else second and so on? That way we know when it is our turn to continue.]

I think of the Band Aid song. It depends on what it is about, maybe comical or something to do with new musicians. I'd probably wait a while. Half-Knot Stitches

Alex and Cassie were consulting the map when Aethel and Elizabeth joined them. "What happened to you?" Alex asked. "You know, dark wood and all that." "I don't want to ...

Disorientated, Aethel sat on a tree stump. She had been walking for ages, at least it seemed that way, and she was nowhere near the edge. The forest was thicker ...

Mystery. Something like Agatha Christie[sp?]. Depending on the first few pages, I'd pick it up. Are You Me?

Aethel stepped over fallen trees. She bent, examining scratches in the bark, using her own fingers to see how deep the cuts were. "Sharp claws," she said. Moving off, she ...

Nothing. I live with 'matons, do what I like. ~Aethel .: If you ever wrote a book/play/TV show, what would you entitle it?

Hello! Welcome to the site! Would you prefer to be called Velaskan Sky, Velaskan or something else? I'm Myth. I like to read/write fantasy, sci-fi and historical fiction. Hope to ...

Editing in process. Locked.

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * As if in a deep dream, he pushed the door open to reveal a blurry image of a short man ...

Hello! I felt the pub entrance was clichéd, silence while everyone took in her experience and then discussing her. It has been done often, so I think you could come ...

Hello! Noticed a few typos and spelling mistakes in there. Also, remember to add a paragraph for each new speaker, a couple of times you had Wiggins and Tobey speaking ...