Myth

Despite being tired, Aethel could not sleep while the coach rumbled. She looked from Alex to Cassie, both staring into nothingness. Elizabeth gazed out the windows. "I'm hungry," she said. ...

*smacks head* I was wondering what you meant by 'New Point Messages'.

A lady of high-society. Probably stuck-up and always trying to attract attention. Dissen

Bottled. ~Aethel .: Would you stop a mob beating up their victim?

Aethel cut him short. "Should of told your boys to be careful. It was fine when I packed it." "If you don't—" "Shut up." She disconnected and swung around to ...

That was hard to read. I don't mean the words, but what actually happened. I know my Mum and her female relatives weren't treated like that, even though she had ...

I'm thinking an autobiography about Wigs and her writing. I'd pick it up. Constable's Cloud

Good luck with outlining. How about providing a brief summary of Oblivion or Fleet [if you have any ideas on it, sounds like sci-fi to me]?

Rice. ~Aethel .: What do you think of your creator? As in your writer.

An old woman everyone loves and calls, "Nana!" Half-Knot

I hate books. *watches Alluston's collection burn* ~Aethel .: Soda or Juice?

A new Garth Nix character, possibly related to Sariel or Liriel with a special talent. Quent

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * The clock ticked on, perpetually at quarter to 3 . Please write numbers out. “ Uhhh… Mr. Mopel? May I ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * Indeed, Tip’s warning on Tap’s sense of time was proved true. For it was not a half hour, an hour, ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * "NO!" You should avoid capital letters when shouting, the exclamation mark shows the character is angry, etc. " [t] hink ...